Post by PuzzleChick on Oct 19, 2011 15:51:51 GMT -5
Well, I ended up re-writing my synopsis about five dozen times. Here's my new one:
No, I didn't change my MC's name. I just took out a subplot that involved him having two names, so he can be described with his real name in the synopsis now. xD (Originally I had intended for the reader to think Jesse and Reed were two different people, and at the end of the story there was going to be this big plot twist where he actually IS Reed, and he's been using a fake identity all along because he abandoned his former self as a child as a way of dealing with emotional trauma. But I decided I wasn't in the mood to write about depressing things, so I scrapped that subplot. It was bogging down the whole story and seemed weirdly shoehorned in anyway, so I was kind of glad to scrap it.)
“And, of course, stability isn't nearly so spectacular as instability. And being contented has none of the glamour of a good fight against misfortune." – Aldous Huxley
Reed Dupree. Shapeshifter by birth, fabulous by nature. Part-time car thief and forger for fun and profit. Occasional good-guy, when the inclination strikes, but never putting another person above his own concerns. He sees no way he could be knocked off his worry-free path, all funded by his less-than-legal talents and a hefty settlement from when his parents went sky-diving fifteen years ago, and gravity laughed in their faces.
Having a roommate of any kind was never one of his plans, but if it had been he certainly wouldn’t have chosen the studious, moralistic, too-righteous-for-his-own-good Alistair Scott.
But that was who he ended up with when he stole a 1967 Shelby Mustang, and saved the life of the dying young man he found locked in the trunk. He didn’t know about the assassins hellbent on finishing the job until later, and he didn't know why they wanted Al dead until much later. Now he's up to his ears with things to worry about, and somehow Al's safety has found its way to the top of that list.
The universe does so love to prove people wrong.
No, I didn't change my MC's name. I just took out a subplot that involved him having two names, so he can be described with his real name in the synopsis now. xD (Originally I had intended for the reader to think Jesse and Reed were two different people, and at the end of the story there was going to be this big plot twist where he actually IS Reed, and he's been using a fake identity all along because he abandoned his former self as a child as a way of dealing with emotional trauma. But I decided I wasn't in the mood to write about depressing things, so I scrapped that subplot. It was bogging down the whole story and seemed weirdly shoehorned in anyway, so I was kind of glad to scrap it.)